Twice upon a time there were only two things:
feelings and a color. The color was called Regoheketti (Rego for short). Rego was
insanely bored and lonely because he needed more to do. In the past Rego had
felt many feelings such as happy, cheerful, glad, and proud.
You
see, Rego had recently figured out how to take a piece of his body out, shape
it, leave it there, change it whenever he wanted, and to put it back in his
solid-squirmy-fluid-gassy body. The first 50 times, this brought on all the
happy, cheerful, glad, and proud feelings. The next 50,000 times led to very,
very extreme boredom. He’s been doing this for 50 years now.
See how it’s boring?
Now this is only chapter one.
There are many more chapters coming up. Chapter two will be about when
Regoheketti makes a microscopic cell and grows wiser with each word when he
feels new feelings. Don’t miss chapter two!
This sounds like the beginning of Kurt Vonnegut novel, Clark! I am SO impressed, and absolutely intrigued. I haven't read a book in awhile that has grabbed its audience so quickly in the beginning. I can't wait for Chapter 2.
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DeleteFrom Sonnia: Clark, I translated this for Halide and she sends you her love and many kisses. Very intriguing and exciting beginning.
ReplyDeleteI can hardly wait to see how Chapter 2 shapes up!
ReplyDeleteThis is such an interesting story, Clark. You are so creative! I cannot wait to read more!
ReplyDeleteYou ROCK Clark! I absolutely cannot wait for chapter 2! Your an amazing young man!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much I can't wait to hear what you and other people think about chapter two!
DeleteGreat first chapter, Clark! Can't wait to read more. Very creative.
ReplyDeleteThank you I think you will like chapter two
DeleteVery cool Clark! How are you at drawing? I feel like this would be a good illustrated story (I'm curious what Regoheketti looks like!). Looking forward to the next chapter!
ReplyDeleteStay tuned for the rest of the book! (Maybe you'll find out the answer to your question!)
DeleteGreat job Clark. I agree with many of the comments here. I believe this would make a great illustrated book too. I am really looking forward to chapter two.
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DeleteWay to go, Clark! Cannot wait to read chapter two :)
ReplyDeleteWay to go for reading! Thanks
DeleteThat's a great start, Clark! I really liked the "Twice upon a time" beginning.
ReplyDeleteThrice upon a time, quadruple upon a time… and shapes upon a time… it's so cool! you can do almost anything with it! Anyway thanks.
DeleteI loved the opening! I'm excited to see where this goes
ReplyDeleteWhat a great hook, Clark! You really know how to lay out just enough information to intrigue your reader. And I love the foreshadowing at the end: "See how it's boring?" It gives your reader a hint that Rego is about to do something interesting because he so bored. This is a great start to a great novel!
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