tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-200712457804628369.post5236242181759609497..comments2014-07-25T19:50:33.598-07:00Comments on Growing Wiser: Chapter Two: The ObjectAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04196347187184195805noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-200712457804628369.post-6677084953807209272014-07-25T19:50:33.598-07:002014-07-25T19:50:33.598-07:00Excellent transition from Chapter One! By mentioni...Excellent transition from Chapter One! By mentioning boredom again (which was the topic of your last sentence in Chapter One), you help your reader connect the dots from what happened last chapter to what will happen in this chapter. Very strong authorial skills, Clark! Keep on working at it. The best novelists are the one who work the hardest at their craft! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215525806877346461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-200712457804628369.post-18820286510667729032014-07-01T17:07:49.000-07:002014-07-01T17:07:49.000-07:00I feel a big bang coming on! Can't wait to see...I feel a big bang coming on! Can't wait to see what a cell's perspective is like.Rachael Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06520732891160951500noreply@blogger.com